Star persona video feedback and learner response

The first piece of feedback:

WWW:

The lighting was very good, the editing at 2.44 was good, it was different to what others had done.

EBI:

I think the percentage of how quick it was could’ve been a little bit higher, it was a bit slow. Also, there wasn’t a major transformation – I didn’t really get what was being transformed. Maybe if she changed out of her hoodie into something more glam, it would’ve made the video have more of a purpose.

The second piece of feedback:

WWW: I really like the hair and makeup within this video because you could see the change which added to the Mise en scene elements in this video and the lighting and make up changed which was really good.

EBI: I think that within this video there could have been a costume change and a better setting to add to the Mise en scene for the video.

In my work i did not do a mood bored which is why i think i did not do as well as i could of.

For future videos i need to make sure when i am recording i am using the right way as in this one i recorded on a phone horizontal and because of that the video turned out bad.

The aspects of CLAMPS i did well on was the lighting as it always highlighted her face and hair and make up because the finish product was such a contrast in compared to the first one.

The part of CLAMPS i could of done better is the props as there was not much there and setting as it was all filmed in a girls bedroom.

A way I could of improved my media work in the future is by timing myself on things like recording as i don't spend enough time on it. Also planing what i am going to record on what days so i do a better job and understanding of what i am recording.