Coursework: Ignite presentation learner response

1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each category.

Concept:4
Structure:3
Terminology:2
Rehearsal:3
Total:12

Good title as it already suggests horror. Clear concept but still undecided for the camerawork if it will be either shaky or normal handheld. Good poster ideas. Need more to specif more shots.good character planning but talk more about why they subvert stereotypes. Mise en scene planning is fair but need more on location.

2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write a detailed WWW and EBI for your own coursework concept and presentation as a whole.

WWW: I think my concept will be clear and easy for people to understand
EBI: The camerawork will still need to be thought out.

3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your narrative offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Does it fit the genre you are aiming for? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others?

In the film i will be keeping most of the stories the same as what i said before the concept was clear but i might need to change some things up like the spirit of the haunted building. Furthermore, the camera work will still need to be decided as at first i was going to do some handheld and the rest normal medium shots but then it will make less sense to do hand held so i think im going to do the whole movie handheld just so it all clicks and makes sense. Finally, i will change some of the characters origin so it makes subverting their stereotypes that much easier. This will mean i am going to have to change some parts of my statement of intent to make it match the movie more.

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